2nd draft of the production of my music video

2nd draft of music video from jason bernard on Vimeo.

After reading the feedback from the first draft and acting on the information I gained I have improved my music video and finished editing the video to 02:15:00. I have added in the text to make the video this long and have synced the text to the lyrics in the music and added a lot of effects on almost each shot. I plan on making the video at a minimum, 02:50:00 long and will continue adding in effects and posting my work online to allow people to evaluate my video for more feedback.