Feedback for my 2nd draft version of my music video

After showcasing my video to fellow students and my teacher, I had gained feedback that will be used to improve my work for the 3rd draft and maybe final draft depending on the feedback which will follow from the 3rd draft.

First of all my 2nd draft was 02:15 long, after my teacher told me to research the average length of radio edits, I found out that the average length was 02:50 - 03:15 and I plan on making my video at least 03:00 minutes long, also the students in my class told me that I needed to use different colours and change the background image throughout the video to make it more interesting, therefore in my next draft I will add more effects that change the colour of the text and make sure that they link together and add a background image which may animate around the screen or just change the image to something similar but have different visuals.